This week author Teresa Fischer,
writing as TR Fischer, joins us with her tip. TR Fischer is a writer, wife,
mother and adrenaline junky who gets her fix as a buffalo rancher.
TR’s
Tip on Writing and Rules
Rules Schmules
I admit I’ve always been a bit of a rebel. As part
of a critique group for two years, I often heard my fellow writers espouse on
the “rules” for writing fiction. A character can only cry once in a book. Show,
don’t tell. Watch for echos—don’t use the same word within a certain number of
pages. You need to establish A, B, C & D in the first three pages or nobody
will read your book. And I’m just getting started.
The non-rebel side of me understands the need for
clear boundaries in writing. In addition to the various elements that make up a
good story, my goal is to write a clean, well-edited manuscript so readers
aren’t snagged on typos or missed words, etc. I give no quarter to lazy
writing/writers.
That said, every time I heard one of my writing
companions go on about their rules, I would think of a book that broke that
particular one and know that it worked for me as a reader.
My advice—not that you asked for it—is to know the
rules and use them as guidelines. In my sometimes-humble opinion, one can
either write a good story or not. (Those who don’t have that ability sometimes
rely on the rules, as if there’s some sort of formula or recipe for success
that doesn’t flow from a creative gift.) For me, story trumps everything
else. On balance, even if there is a
good story buried in mistakes and weak writing, I’m not going to waste my time
digging for it because well-written books are everywhere.
It’s painful, but I recommend getting honest
feedback from other writers along the way. Try to find people who will be
honest without cutting you off at the knees. That’s how I improved as a writer.
Fortunately, I no longer need the level of help I did early on, but there was
no shortcut.
Blurb for
Changing Sky
After walking away from her job as a teacher, Skylar Biondi drives a
brown truck and delivers packages. It keeps her busy and
out of the bars. Skylar closely guards the painful truth about why her romance
with a Colorado Rockies pitcher ended suddenly. She relives the past in her
dreams, only to wake to the brutal reality of being alone.
Former army medic, Enrique Avalos, keeps his distance from Skylar,
who bears an uncanny resemblance to his ex-wife. When she sets up a contest to
name the cat he rescued from a dumpster behind his motorcycle repair shop, new
business begins to flow in, forcing Enrique to bolster his armor.
While on her route, Skylar comes across nine-year-old Mia and knows
she’s in peril. When Enrique spots Skylar skulking around at night, he assumes
she’s casing the neighborhood. Can Enrique and Skylar set their differences
aside in time to help Mia?
In
this warm, sometimes heartbreaking tale, an extraordinary confluence of events
leads three people from different worlds to the doorstep of a journey none of
them could have foreseen.
Excerpt
from “Changing Sky”
A surge of
desperation gnawed at Skylar’s gut. What did one do when life took a sudden
turn and the music stopped? When the dock suddenly ended and you found yourself
in water that was over your head? It was as though she’d shed her skin and the
new Skylar was as yet unformed, though completely exposed. She wished there
were some way to know how long the process would take—assuming there would be
an end to it—and how much pain to expect along the way. It was like emotional
chemotherapy. Would she survive? If so, would she be more than a shadow of her
former self?
“Where’d you
go?” Alex brought his arm around her shoulders, drawing her out of the swamp.
“Sorry.
Sometimes I get lost in my own head.” Though she wanted to, she didn’t dare put
her arm around him. After what happened in June, she no longer trusted herself.
He sighed.
“It’s okay.”
As they
approached the second corner, she turned them around, walking back in uneasy
silence. They’d covered all the safe topics. What remained were all the things
they couldn’t say. Subjects they couldn’t raise for fear one or both of them
might capsize. They crossed Ohio Avenue and arrived at her car. “So, are you seeing
anyone, Alex? Or still playing the field?”
He elbowed her.
“You are the only woman—no, the only human—who gets away with crap like
that.”
Knowing it was
true, she couldn’t help smiling. “That’s because I knew you before you were Mr.
Baseball.” He’d been dubbed that by the press years before and it had stuck.
“Lots of people
knew me then. None of them talk to me the way you do.”
“Well, that’s
too bad. I think you need it.”
Alex faced her,
gently grasping her shoulders. “You’re right, Sky. I do need it. You keep me
honest.” He looked like he wanted to kiss her. His hazel eyes, cloaked by dark
lashes, gazed at her mouth.
Skylar put her
palm on his chest. “Alex, don’t.”
“Don’t what?”
“Look at me
like that. We can’t go there. It will just make things worse.”
He whipped off
his hat and ran a hand through his hair. Just like she remembered. “Skylar.” It
came out ragged. “There hasn’t been anyone else. Not since …” He trailed off.
She clamped her
eyes shut, thinking of her own indiscretion. Whether there had or hadn’t been
women in his life these past months made no difference to her—she was in no
position to judge. And she didn’t get why he said it. Had what happened made
him regret his lifestyle choices? Skylar pulled her keys from her purse. “I
should go. I hope you’ll keep this between us. I’m not ready to face anyone
else.”
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http://www.trfischer.com/changing-sky.html
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Thanks TR, for dropping by and sharing that great writing tip.
Don’t forget to check back next week for another author’s tip or tweak.
Let the Rebels unite! The story sounds wonderful and I love the cover! All the best!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Melissa. Glad to know I'm not alone!
DeleteI totally agree about using the rules as guidelines. It's story above all else.
ReplyDeleteAmen, sister! I've never read a good book of rules I wanted to read twice. :)
ReplyDeleteI tend to break the rules without realize I'm doing it. I'm just trying to tell a good story.
ReplyDeleteBTW, loved your excerpt.