First, thank you Rhobin for these interesting topics all year.
Next, I don't have any Christmas excerpts so I wrote a short piece with my characters from The Hawkins' Ranch series. It's a short piece on what I think would be an ideal Christmas with family. I hope you enjoy it.
Gabe watched Cody carefully picked up Gran, so she could
place the star on the top of the tree. Gran and Grandpa Jack had bought the
star their first Christmas. The had little money at the time and chopped down a
small tree and strung it with popcorn balls, but they’d wanted a star. So,
their Christmas present to each other had been that star. It had been on the
family Christmas tree every year since.
Cody gently placed
Gran down and she perched on the chair closest to the tree. Gabe smiled at the
family gathering. Everyone was here for the annual tree lighting and dinner. Children
skipped around the room putting red and green balls a on the lower branches and
Lucky and Blue added their barks from behind the gated doorway. Annie put
another record on the old record player in the corner. Silent Night filled the
room. Everyone joined in to sing along
to the familiar lyrics. The children curled up with their parents. Gabe added
his baritone voice to the words.
Cody sat down beside Maggie and Matt wriggled in between
them. Kye stood behind the chair where Janna sat. Eli climbed up on her lap
snuggled and against her shoulder. Kye’s hand rested on Janna’s shoulder touching
her dark hair and Eli’s head. Molly, Matt and Eli knew the words and added their
childish voices.
Even Luke had taken time away from his practice to be
here with Allie and Molly, their adorable red-headed, adopted daughter.
As the song came to an end, Sam plugged in the lights and
the eight-foot fir tree burst into light. Everyone oohhed. The children grinned.
Gabe smiled. It was a familiar scene filled with love. Delicious smells of
carefully spiced mulled wine and Christmas baking emitted from thee kitchen. He
and his family had so much to be thankful for. Maybe this would be the year he’d
add a new member to the growing family – maybe. Until then he’d appreciate another special
Hawkins’ Christmas with his family, food, music and love. It would be a
wonderful Christmas.
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year everyone!
And don't forget to check out these other websites to read their thoughts on
Skye Taylor http://www.skye-writer.com/blogging_by_the_seaHelena Fairfax http://www.helenafairfax.com/blog
Anne Stenhouse http://annestenhousenovelist.wordpress.com/
A.J. Maguire http://ajmaguire.wordpress.com/
Fiona McGier http://www.fionamcgier.com/
Connie Vines http://mizging.blogspot.com/
Diane Bator http://dbator.blogspot.ca/
Dr. Bob Rich https://wp.me/p3Xihq-1qI
Victoria Chatham http://www.victoriachatham.com
Rhobin L Courtright http://www.rhobinleecourtright.com
Enjoyed your story, reminded me of decorating our Christmas tree with my brothers and sisters. I hope Gabe's story comes out soon.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Rhobin. I'm working on Gabe's story.
DeleteI could soooo picture this scene, the warmth, the love and the spirit of Christmas.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Skye. that's the feeling I was going for.
DeleteHeartwarming!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Victoria.
ReplyDeleteNice! I loved this little taste of their family.
ReplyDeletegood job, girlfriend!
ReplyDeleteLovely scene, Beverley! Happy Christmas!
ReplyDeleteNow this is the way the lighting of the tree should happen. So nice to have family at Christmas. Enjoyed your story.
ReplyDeleteJQ Rose
I'm getting round our exceprts a little late, but even so. Our tree is still up as we hold off the disrobing as long as possible. It's one of my favourite things about Christmas and I, too, love the smells associated. Happy New year, Anne
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